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Ugh… I felt like crap…. I heard someone crying silently beside me.
Who would be crying for my sake?
I tried moving my arm, but it didn't move.
What was this?
I tried to open my eyes, but failed. Next to me I heard a strange "Beep Beep Beep" sound..
Where was I? I can't remember anything from before.. The last I know was that I was looking at Sasuke's bare chest… "Beep-Beep-Beep-Beep" Oh so that thing beeped when my heart beats… Wait, why does my heart beat faster when I think of Sasuke? What's wrong with me?
'Naruto.. Please wake up…' SASUKE? That was Sasuke's voice? Why was he here? And why is he worried about me?
'Sasuke.. You should go home now, visiting hours ended four hours ago.' My heart skipped a beat of happiness. Sasuke had been here for that long?
'Beep----Beep Beep Beep' I found that thing really annoying…
'I-I'll go when he wakes up..' Sasuke's voice cracked.
'You know he might never wake up….' Kakashi's voice made Sasuke to growl.
'Don't say that!' I felt something wet drip on my hand.
Was Sasuke… crying?
And what was that about never waking up again?
I'm way to hungry to lie here forever..  (He finally figured out he was in the hospital)
I heard Kakashi sigh and walk away.
'Naruto… You can't hear me.. But I want you to know before that monitor stops beeping…'
A tear fell on my face and then I noticed how close he was to me.
'I.. Love you'  He said and then pressed his lips on mine softly.
It was such a shock the monitor began beeping like an idiot and my eyes flew open.
'NARUTO!' Sasuke smiled like I never saw him do before.
It was more grinning, or laughing, or a combination of that.
It was so beautiful I could only look at his laughing face.
Sasuke pressed on the button next to the bed so the doctor would come.
Now it was my turn to grin.
'So, you love me?' Sasuke went bright red. 'Y-you heard that?'
I grinned.
At that moment a doctor came in.
'I'm glad you're awake!' It was Tsubame. 'Get out of the way little boy, he can still fall back in his coma!' I laughed, "little boy?"
'Auch!' Laughing hurt.

'I SLEPT TWO WHOLE WEEKS?' I was sitting up in the hospital bed and Sasuke rolled with his eyes.
'You were in COMA for two whole weeks, dobe' I frowned.
Sasuke explained what happened.
I looked at Sasuke, his face was messed up. (I found out he wears a little eyeliner…)
Black stripes ran down his face mixed with the dried tears, his hair wasn't "Messy" Like always.
(A fake kind of messy.. Done with a styling thingie.. now his hair was just "Real messy")
I smiled and stroked his cheek.
'You think I would die? I still have so many things to do… Paying back Lee for example.'
Sasuke chuckled while grabbing my hand and holding it. 'He ate my ramen..'
Sasuke laughed his laugh that sounded like gently ringing bells.
'I love you too.' Sasuke's eyes widened and he blushed deep red.
I grabbed Sasuke shirt and pulled him close, he was still blushing and I grinned.
Sasuke smiled and embraced me.
'Thank god you didn't die…' He buried his nose in my hair and I felt him smile.
'Just let's get one thing clear, I'm the seme.' I blushed slightly.
'You wish, you know you have Uke in your name?' Sasuke grinned.
'So what? You don't have the attitude for it.'
I growled slightly and sighed. 'Fine'
Sasuke grinned and kissed me.
We'll see who's going to be on top,
So part five is up :w00t:
loll, I always suspected Sasuke to be a real emo and make-up wearer XD

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shantelleuchiha Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Sasuke-Change Uke
ArtFreakOnline Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student General Artist
DEBS666 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
am i supposed to wait for the next part, IMPOSSIBLE! I'll die of desperation by the time it's up D:
ArtFreakOnline Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Awww don't worry, part five will be up today ^^ I'm glad you like it~
DAKFish Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
This is awesome ^_^ so <3 it and can't wait for more to follow :D
ArtFreakOnline Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks~~ Part six will be up today ^^
Iheartyou101 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
hahaha... i lafd so hard wen u said tsubame instead of tsunade.... lmao... i luv the story... cnt wait for da next 1..
ArtFreakOnline Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Holy crap, lol I just realized i wrote Tsubame XD (LOL WTF THAT MEANS SWALLOW IN ENGLISH *dies*)
Thanks~ Part five will be up today~~
Iheartyou101 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
Part 6 you mean??
ArtFreakOnline Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student General Artist
YES I MEAN THAT... wtf is wrong with me today... D: Thankies for the correction
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